Tuesday, June 22, 2010

The Line Has Been Drawn

Stuck at life's crossroads, I measure my time once again;
I measure the depth, the love and along with it, the pain.
I hardly have anything to lose in love, yet I lose it like a beginner,
I see in vain, how everything slips through the gaps of my finger.
The more I try to cling on to those pieces, broken and torn
Halt! says a voice, the line has been drawn.

Stumbling along life's ups and downs, I am now at the edge;
Locked pains, buried tears...my heart, a key-less cage.
I look past your heart - to an older feel, to an earlier you,
Of loveless eyes, bitter words, of changes very few.
Yet something inside me craves for the words that are gone
Don't move any further, says he, the line has been drawn.

The need was mine, to be with you, to stand up for you;
Now, the need's over, and it's only me without you.
Your love's gone, a love that was never meant to be,
I stand a lonely self, a tired me...myself with me.
My heart still aches inside, every moment my love re-born
But I am a no one, reminds he, the line has been drawn.

4 comments:

Preeti said...

u make me want to cry....i've read and re-read tis and it doesn't fail to touch my heart...it is so full of pain, so full of love. Absolutely loved it:) Keep writing so well :)

kirthana amirthavasani said...

absolutely brilliant..wonderful writing :)

Anonymous said...

The poem is great in terms of feeling . Write more hopeful ones:)

Somebody said...

If love can be uplifting, life's great fountainhead, it can also be the most dampener in its absence too! Very well penned :) going great guns as always